Samples

College Application Statement
(Admitted to UC Berkeley)

College Personal Statement
(Admitted to Cornell)

Goals Essays (Before and After) (Admitted to Wharton)

Life Passion Essay
(Admitted to Stanford GSB)

Personal Statement
(Admitted to Columbia Law)

Diversity Statement
(Admitted to Harvard Law)

Graduate Personal Statement (Admitted to USC Engineering)

Graduate Personal Statement
(Admitted to Oxford)

Short Essay
(Won Truman Scholarship)

Research Proposal
(Finalist Gates Millenium)